Thursday, 2 April 2009

Motunrayo (Part 1)

Akin was a very strong man, young but fearless. He possessed the strength of a lion and the wisdom of an owl. As much as Akin was tough he was also very stubborn and quick to anger. He had once killed a snake with his bare hands. He seemed to always get his way.

Akin lived alone in a hut left to him by his late parents in the village where he was brought up. Left as an only child to fend for himself, he was used to being alone. He very much preferred it that way. Tall and very handsome, adored by many girls in the village he was. But to the elders, Akin was as an outcast, both his parents had died mysterious deaths and that was enough to cause the ignorant minds of the villagers into believing that he was the cause. Foolish people he thought.

One day, whilst eating kolanut by the side of his hut, Akin spotted a girl walking through the bushes, she was carrying a bucket, probably to fetch water he thought. He recognized her instantly, that long hair, that body, that beautiful face, it was Motunrayo. He had lusted after this girl ever since the day he laid his eyes on her but the she had rejected him the many times he had attempted to woo her.

He wanted her as his wife but refused to plead with her. He believed that men should never have to beg , especially a woman. Akin stood up and followed her.

After fetching the water, Motunrayo , tired and hot laid down next to the stream, she wanted to relax before making her way back home to prepare her family’s meal. Suddenly, Akin appeared in front of her, shocked by the sudden intruder, Motunrayo briskly stood to her feet. She recognized Akin immediately and wondered what he was doing.

Akin greeted her and asked how she was, she replied him but her failure to return the question annoyed him. Motunrayo lifted her bucket when he asked her when she was planning to finally accept his andproposal adding that her that her stubbornness was getting too much.

She ignored his comment told him that she did not plan on marrying him. When he asked her why, she shrugged her shoulders and adjusted her oshuka. Akin could not stand anymore rejection from her, her refusal to oblige angered him. Aware of his mood, Motunrayo carefully laid it the bucket on her oshuka and began to walk away but he pushed her down causing the bucket to fall. Akin tore off her wrapper and raped her, her cries were hushed by the sound of the noisy stream.

Akin believed that this was the only way for them to be together. If he succeeded in getting her pregnant, knowing the shame it would bring to her entire family if she gave birth out of wedlock, her family would be forced to hand her over to him in marriage, it was the only way.

TO BE CONTINUED.

9 comments:

blogoratti 2 April 2009 15:20  

Nice!
A title? How about Motunrayo...

Cappuccine Baby 2 April 2009 15:24  

Thanks :)

True sha, that sounds simple :) Thanks a bunch!

JustDB 2 April 2009 15:25  

Mscheeewww -- all of una wey ey hand tori for half way ehn!!!!!!! Looks like a good story o... You've got more talents than we know of Cappy o!!!!

Cappuccine Baby 2 April 2009 15:26  

Hehehehe tank you darling ooo, I will add more sha, just you wait :D

Gee 2 April 2009 18:19  

ahahah akin harsh o!!
shuu...rape ke?

Bibi 2 April 2009 19:14  

oh i love stories and now i can't wait for a part 11. there is a part two right? nice one. did you write it?

BSNC 3 April 2009 03:37  

hmmm am liking the story. oh not again.. hope you will finish the story soon

Cappuccine Baby 3 April 2009 10:26  

@gee
Lol yes he is

@bibi
aww thanx, yeah i wrote it :)

@BSNC
Thanx dear :)

Buttercup 4 April 2009 06:43  

oh hell naw!